Saturday, August 30, 2008

spectacle

sensuous breezes croon
and touch a leaf with song

flower the sun and moon
every moment fragrant

an ocean's mystic tune
seen the sea in the wave

the aching heart would swoon
so taste a cuckoo's call

the summer skies of june
hear the radiance laugh

the five frolicking flames
set alight the senses

for love is all around..

/original/z.g.

18 comments:

  1. sensuous breezes croon... an ocean's mystic tune... lovely visuals! Thanks for these.

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  2. Very strong imagery-excellent.
    Thank you for sharing this.

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  3. Very nice, the mood just flowed out of your words.

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  4. What a wonderful and hopeful poem!

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  5. These lines are delightful:

    the summer skies of june
    hear the radiance laugh

    Thanks for this.

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  6. A lovely feel good poem. The words flow so easily.

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  7. What rich imagery, it should almost be fattening to read!! Seriously, this is really beautiful.

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  8. There is nothing better than love and this is so romantic! Love it!

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  9. what a rich, radiant poem ... lovely, JP/deb

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  10. Those floating memories of long ago summer days and nights resound between your lines. Lovely.

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  11. This is lovely. I loved these lines"the summer skies of june
    hear the radiance laugh" I am ajune baby and love this month.
    Your verse flows so well and your imagery is excellent.
    Well done my friend.

    love-bd

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  12. zoya,
    I'm gonna get a glass of iced tea and sit on my porch and read this again.
    thanks,
    Karen

    http://everydaymemoir.com/?p=164

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  13. these verses remind me of my childhood summers...

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  14. such an ocean rhtym to this. Thank you.

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..namastey!~