Saturday, April 12, 2008

'stranded'words..*

consonance,dissonance
a stranded note
pines for music!
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piano keys
trembling fingers
console stranded melodies!
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[post edited after QP'S visit,her comments don't refer to the above] /original/.zg.*2nd thoughts.["stranded"1st >.april8>below]

4 comments:

  1. Hey there, first off I wanted to answer your questions about chord progressions. If you are a bassist and playing Jazz, then I'd say go for it! Otherwise you probably should rethink the bass line. *smile* Those are my own opinions but I know what I like.

    Secondly, these poems are great. I esp. can relate to the last two. Great job. Peace to you, QP

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  2. These poems using "stranded" are wonderful and creative! :D

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..namastey!~