Tuesday, December 15, 2009

spider-web . osi

' idiomatic '

then - , pony tail flying
' dancing in the dark '
garbed as spiderman
her weird tomboyish ways
couldn't make head nor tail

of spider- phobias -

now - , spins into a maze
her silken flowing hair
the fear of spiders
and a teacher's utterance -
cobwebs in the head ..

/ original / z.g.

( Ed:- Line 6 - of arachnophobia )

- ' dancing in the dark '/ Springsteen / rock
: - arachnophobia - the fear of spiders


  1. I have such an image of a small child here, very vivid for me. But, ya better pay attention in class!

  2. That is great. Those cobwebs are a form of divine order. We must respect them and their young messengers.

  3. Ohhh! What fun--
    Can't you just feel the little spiders inside your head, making little traps for errant thoughts and ideas?

    Smiles to you, friend--great stuff. And of course you're a Springsteen fan.

  4. hi loch ,

    dinosaur that i am , they won't let me into a class .. but ,the class pays attention to me ..

  5. love the Springsteen reference. Cobwebs in the head.. I don't think if that's a bad thing! Great read~

  6. An enjoyable and provocative read! You're always right on the mark!