Thursday, October 15, 2009

postman

postman

a paper plane

chasing
butterflies
finds a boy

unfolds
a message
no from no to

what if
love be
an accident

courtesy
serendipity
a drunken postman ..

/ original / z.g.

[ not happy with my original post > Here /
edited the same to find that it sounded like a bad joke made worse
then rehashed it into something school - boyish ..]

Ref :
Sr No.19 / gotcha babble - linked > / >Here /

( :- the donts of poetry )


4 comments:

  1. I do enjoy this twisted nice thought

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  2. Love is an accident - and the drunken postman! Fun post.

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  3. hi 'if ' ,

    if_ i think is a beautiful word , with a power of its own ..

    ( don't even think there is a play on ur name / poetry is a medium of beauty .. or so i'd like to believe.. / just in case )

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..namastey!~