Monday, December 22, 2008

a winter's day. (osi)

..'a warm winter'

a path clad in velvet white
naked branches unashamed
a cantata in stillness
it sings of you, i sing too

the sun on a hiatus
the coming home is early
so a fire crackles with glee
togetherness to sing to..

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10 comments:

  1. Tumblewords:December 22, 2008 at 12:24 PM

    Warm, charming, lovely! So nicely done!

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  2. SandyCarlsonDecember 22, 2008 at 1:05 PM

    Oh, to experience that glee--and the coming home! Thanks for this work.

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  3. anthonynorthDecember 22, 2008 at 2:20 PM

    From a shiver to cosy warmth. You took me with you.

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  4. RavenDecember 22, 2008 at 3:01 PM

    Lovely.

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  5. qualcosa di belloDecember 22, 2008 at 3:04 PM

    your winter beauty makes me forget the cold!...your words are so warm & inviting

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  6. zoya gautamDecember 22, 2008 at 4:14 PM

    Deborah Godin said...

    "That long poem you write for A Winter's Day is absolutely stunning! I always enjoy your words, but that one really stood out for me!"

    December 22, 2008 3:21 PM

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  7. Beth P.December 24, 2008 at 5:15 AM

    Dear Zoya--
    I too think about the nakedness of the trees and how vulnerable they are. I really liked your poem. It felt, like others have said, warm and relaxed! Thanks~~~

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  8. zoya gautamDecember 25, 2008 at 3:15 PM

    ..Many Thanks To All Of U..

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  9. JimDecember 27, 2008 at 4:20 AM

    Hey Zoya, this is neat. Get off early and hurry home. I have at times marvelled at how people are in such a hurry home regularly. Early is best.
    I finally put up my little winter day bit. You can decide its ending.
    ..

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  10. Quiet PathsDecember 27, 2008 at 10:23 AM

    I so enjoyed this piece. A cantata in stillness is wonderful! Merry Christmas this third day on.

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..namastey!~

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