Tuesday, April 22, 2008

survivor:[triumph]

a quirky unlit alley
of emotions distraught
'nother metaphor taught,
the drowsy eyed 'gators
of depressive thoughts

they yawn wide open
as if to gobble up
an entire being,ah,yes
one does want to cling
to a someone, something

but wouldn't they respond
on this day that's dawned
past a school shoot out
and, i am a survivor
'tis not a triumph.. /original/z.g.

3 comments:

  1. Great images, and the soul searching is quite moving... well written!

    Rob
    Image & Verse

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  2. That is so powerful. I love the gator gobbling up an entire being...Great work.

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  3. This is very hard hitting. I agree with Rob about the great images and the soul searching.

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..namastey!~