faith
wanting a talisman
but finding a leaf
still dancing in the breeze
a dead leaf swirling in the whirlwind
its miracle of life ended
consecrated by the sunrays
that moment of green
was an anonymous breath
inside somebody's chest
letting live
wanting a talisman
but finding a leaf ..
/ original / z.g.
great one Zoya..
ReplyDeletewe already had our first snow here...lol!
Zoya,
ReplyDeleteYour mood is inspiring in this poem....beautiful :)
so sweet!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words.
ReplyDeleteperfecto !!! :) loved it ..
ReplyDeleteGorgeous writing as usual!
ReplyDeleteI can feel your words, really feel them - a true pleasure!
Have a great week :)
Anna
Ah, I so love this one -
ReplyDeletePer your request on my OSI Talisman - I'd be pleased to have that link - thank you!
ReplyDeleteI love the movement of this poem and the subtle sense of discovery.
ReplyDeleteSo..was it enough, my friend?
ReplyDeletecan't lie to u beth , still searching
ReplyDeleteI love this!!! After picking up some leaves this weekend...they would be ok to be my talisman! Thanks so much for your kind comment this week - it is so greatly appreciated!
ReplyDeletemany thanks ..
ReplyDeleteI have enjoyed the circular motion of this piece. Lovely.
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