Monday, October 12, 2009

talisman.osi

faith

wanting a talisman

but finding a leaf

still dancing in the breeze
a dead leaf swirling in the whirlwind
its miracle of life ended
consecrated by the sunrays
that moment of green
was an anonymous breath
inside somebody's chest
letting live

wanting a talisman

but finding a leaf ..

/ original / z.g.
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14 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 12, 2009 at 4:41 AM

    great one Zoya..

    we already had our first snow here...lol!

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  2. Julia DuttaOctober 12, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    Zoya,
    Your mood is inspiring in this poem....beautiful :)

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  3. Sandra.ifOctober 12, 2009 at 6:52 AM

    so sweet!

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  4. anthonynorthOctober 12, 2009 at 7:15 AM

    Beautiful words.

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  5. PS the PratsieOctober 12, 2009 at 7:44 AM

    perfecto !!! :) loved it ..

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  6. annalarssonphotographyOctober 12, 2009 at 8:16 AM

    Gorgeous writing as usual!
    I can feel your words, really feel them - a true pleasure!

    Have a great week :)
    Anna

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  7. Tumblewords:October 12, 2009 at 12:23 PM

    Ah, I so love this one -

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  8. Tumblewords:October 12, 2009 at 2:52 PM

    Per your request on my OSI Talisman - I'd be pleased to have that link - thank you!

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  9. SandyCarlsonOctober 12, 2009 at 5:48 PM

    I love the movement of this poem and the subtle sense of discovery.

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  10. Beth P.October 12, 2009 at 6:25 PM

    So..was it enough, my friend?

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  11. zoya gautamOctober 12, 2009 at 8:27 PM

    can't lie to u beth , still searching

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  12. PattiOctober 14, 2009 at 4:51 PM

    I love this!!! After picking up some leaves this weekend...they would be ok to be my talisman! Thanks so much for your kind comment this week - it is so greatly appreciated!

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  13. zoya gautamOctober 15, 2009 at 3:32 AM

    many thanks ..

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  14. Tammie LeeOctober 16, 2009 at 10:23 AM

    I have enjoyed the circular motion of this piece. Lovely.

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..namastey!~

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