Saturday, August 30, 2008

spectacle

sensuous breezes croon
and touch a leaf with song

flower the sun and moon
every moment fragrant

an ocean's mystic tune
seen the sea in the wave

the aching heart would swoon
so taste a cuckoo's call

the summer skies of june
hear the radiance laugh

the five frolicking flames
set alight the senses

for love is all around..

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  1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2008 at 2:31 AM

    sensuous breezes croon... an ocean's mystic tune... lovely visuals! Thanks for these.

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  2. Edward S GaultAugust 31, 2008 at 3:54 AM

    Very strong imagery-excellent.
    Thank you for sharing this.

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  3. AnonymousAugust 31, 2008 at 5:11 AM

    Very nice, the mood just flowed out of your words.

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  4. AndreeAugust 31, 2008 at 7:31 AM

    What a wonderful and hopeful poem!

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  5. SandyCarlsonAugust 31, 2008 at 7:33 AM

    These lines are delightful:

    the summer skies of june
    hear the radiance laugh

    Thanks for this.

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  6. anthonynorthAugust 31, 2008 at 8:48 AM

    A lovely feel good poem. The words flow so easily.

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  7. Deborah GodinAugust 31, 2008 at 8:50 AM

    What rich imagery, it should almost be fattening to read!! Seriously, this is really beautiful.

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  8. AnonymousAugust 31, 2008 at 11:03 AM

    There is nothing better than love and this is so romantic! Love it!

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  9. gautami tripathySeptember 1, 2008 at 5:17 AM

    I like the positive feeling it enhances...

    I catch words haphazardly

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  10. spacedlawSeptember 1, 2008 at 10:19 AM

    That is beautiful.

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  11. JP/debSeptember 1, 2008 at 7:38 PM

    what a rich, radiant poem ... lovely, JP/deb

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  12. me ann my cameraSeptember 2, 2008 at 2:49 AM

    Those floating memories of long ago summer days and nights resound between your lines. Lovely.

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  13. Cassiopeia RisesSeptember 2, 2008 at 9:32 AM

    This is lovely. I loved these lines"the summer skies of june
    hear the radiance laugh" I am ajune baby and love this month.
    Your verse flows so well and your imagery is excellent.
    Well done my friend.

    love-bd

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  14. Tumblewords:September 2, 2008 at 9:36 AM

    Ah, lovely! Summer song...lovely!

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  15. UnknownSeptember 2, 2008 at 10:22 AM

    zoya,
    I'm gonna get a glass of iced tea and sit on my porch and read this again.
    thanks,
    Karen

    http://everydaymemoir.com/?p=164

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  16. qualcosa di belloSeptember 3, 2008 at 6:41 PM

    these verses remind me of my childhood summers...

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  17. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2008 at 5:40 AM

    such an ocean rhtym to this. Thank you.

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  18. zoya gautamSeptember 4, 2008 at 12:13 PM

    ..owe my Thanks to All of U..

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..namastey!~

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