' earthen '
ruddy waters flow
to the beat of an udu
the rhythm of the djembe
breaking the shales of sorrow ,
feel the rusty brown mud
in the kiln of a potter ,
arroyos of fire and air
run through the clay ,
crushed,kneaded and burnt,
as if in a volcano ,
to reach a creation
a void of fullness
indurated but tender ,
bearing the salt of life ,
turning my breath into song
an ocarina
this ancient flute of clay ..
/ original / z.g.
( udu - djembe : drums of clay
ocarina - clay flutes with origins going back to the mayan civilization )
[ Ed : Line 5 - into rusty brown mud ]
This was so lovely...I especially loved the line "turning my breath into song". That resonated deeply. Wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful melody - images so fine they sing!
ReplyDeleteindurated to become a materpiece...:)
ReplyDeleteZoya, can't help myself but ask what some words u used here mean...(e.g udu, djembe, ocarina)?
Now I understand your aversion to generalizations! Not a one to be found here... I enjoyed so many lines here - all so sensual and alive. Bravo.
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ReplyDeleteAre you my mother?
What an amazing piece, zoya--
Thank you for the rhythm, the pulse, the light play.
Love this.
many thanks ..
ReplyDeleteDis s d 1st tym m here n I loved ur works,thoroughly...
ReplyDeletelovely post!
**a void of fullness
wow!
**turning my breath into song
wow! wow!
I like the way you relate spiritual ideas with material stuff...interesting and universal message...
ReplyDeletepiacere pooja !
ReplyDeleteindian names carry the wonderment of human thought ..
pooja /shraddha ( one of the writers at osi )
i have stolen " piacere " from qualcosa's blog _ it means _ pleasure to have u visit ..
To be a void of fullness after all that preparation, all that breaking down....
ReplyDeleteSincerely great, arroyos of fire and air! Wow.
ReplyDeletethe image is amazing from creating with one's hands to the creation of soothing sound....
ReplyDeleteOut of the world! I have read it at least ten times!
ReplyDeleteZoya, you inspire....ah!
Julia
Wow that was great. What an interesting take on prompt.Beautiful work.
ReplyDeleteMelanie