Monday, June 22, 2009

assimilation.osi

' consciousness '

a molecule of pain splits
into iridescent photons
in the dark waters
a moon splinter
like a doppelganger, quakes
fallen from its apogee
crafting chimerical expressions
the branches of fir,cedar or aspens
touched by the light
from a hundred light years away
it all permeates my existence
in one single instant
become i
the brokenness of the moon ..

/original / z.g.
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11 comments:

  1. gautami tripathyJune 22, 2009 at 5:00 AM

    Like the physics way to deal with it!


    stolen from the air

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  2. SandyCarlsonJune 22, 2009 at 6:28 AM

    And like a fire, it burns.

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  3. sgreerpittJune 22, 2009 at 6:34 AM

    Wow! Potent imagery. I see that "moon splinter" reflected in those dark waters, and the trees touched by starlight "from a hundred light years away"!!

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  4. anthonynorthJune 22, 2009 at 7:21 AM

    Mysticism meets physics. Nicely done.

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  5. Sherri B.June 22, 2009 at 7:43 AM

    Mystical and beautiful, with stunning imagery!

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  6. AnonymousJune 22, 2009 at 11:47 AM

    Beautiful! You have a way with words...

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  7. AnonymousJune 22, 2009 at 12:35 PM

    I would love to put this poem into the visulizer in my iTunes.

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  8. Tumblewords:June 22, 2009 at 6:28 PM

    Magical and mystical with no small amount of myth. This is special, special.

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  9. gabrielleJune 22, 2009 at 11:02 PM

    photons of the heart fracturing refract through time. Pain becomes light.
    this is truly stunning

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  10. zoya gautamJune 24, 2009 at 7:22 PM

    .. many thanks everyone ..

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  11. PattiJune 27, 2009 at 6:09 AM

    I loved the line :"cedar or aspens
    touched by the light
    from a hundred light years away" great interpretaion of moolight and assimilation~

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..namastey!~

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