Wednesday, July 22, 2009

inner voice.osi

' no contest '

shape shifting thoughts transfigure
like chameleons camouflage
a trial is on
blindfolded , the heart , adjudicates
there is no colored vision
blows away that smoke screen
my breath
a plea is moved
of nolo contendere
the din of arguments dies
standing on the shores of time
i touch a grain of sand
washed by the waves of life
it coruscates with emotions
seems silent and speechless
speaking the lingo
of every inner voice
seeking a song of love ..

/ original / z.g.
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12 comments:

  1. PattiJuly 22, 2009 at 2:01 PM

    This is a very deep, emotional poem; very well- done! Your choice of words is stellar~

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  2. AnonymousJuly 22, 2009 at 4:16 PM

    'every inner voice" at times, in conflict, yet the poem seems to suggest that beneath all the contending voices is a silent and speechless one, that knows the deep longing of all the voices. Beautifully done!

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  3. JimJuly 22, 2009 at 6:40 PM

    "Love is blind," (and has no argument) the inner voice knows when love is right.
    This is sooooooo pretty.
    ..

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  4. gabrielleJuly 22, 2009 at 7:50 PM

    moving away from the small arguments, the desire to win, the need for justice, bringing us to a place of quiet acceptance and simply being. This was lovely and spoke deeply to me.

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  5. Janet JarrellJuly 23, 2009 at 6:22 AM

    I have always thought that my head was the judge - I am much more comfortable knowing it is my heart!

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  6. Bobbie SandlinJuly 23, 2009 at 10:48 AM

    Very pretty writing!

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  7. zoya gautamJuly 23, 2009 at 12:23 PM

    .. to everyone many thanks ..

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  8. JeevesJuly 23, 2009 at 11:00 PM

    Wow.....

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  9. Gemma WisemanJuly 24, 2009 at 5:59 PM

    Beautiful, plaintive voice rings through this poem! Very moving!

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  10. Sandra.ifJuly 25, 2009 at 9:50 AM

    universal innner voices speaking through us joining us together...

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  11. SandyCarlsonJuly 25, 2009 at 8:03 PM

    I too seek that song.

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  12. Quiet PathsJuly 27, 2009 at 1:59 PM

    I loved how this al flows; especially these lines:

    a plea is moved
    of nolo contendere
    the din of arguments dies

    wonderful!

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..namastey!~

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