tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post6788508929850213072..comments2023-07-01T02:25:10.760-07:00Comments on somewhere beyond: fleeting .osizoya gautamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-48316917946567294502008-10-05T17:29:00.000-07:002008-10-05T17:29:00.000-07:00A fascinating read. I enjoyed this.A fascinating read. I enjoyed this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-73565907576542872272008-10-03T19:30:00.000-07:002008-10-03T19:30:00.000-07:00..A Big Thanks To All Of U....A Big Thanks To All Of U..zoya gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-72456951152207640222008-10-02T17:15:00.000-07:002008-10-02T17:15:00.000-07:00I can feel the frenzy! Makes me want to shut the ...I can feel the frenzy! Makes me want to shut the damned thing off! You captured the mood well!Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-3639650373668759352008-09-30T21:09:00.000-07:002008-09-30T21:09:00.000-07:00You have discovered how to put television - that m...You have discovered how to put television - that mockery of the written word - in its place with the written word. Loved it.<BR/><BR/>And thanks for stopping by to read my fleeting interpretation...TDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10411110456297096938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-9845530471992624912008-09-30T16:01:00.000-07:002008-09-30T16:01:00.000-07:00This is nearly Avant but grounded in the everyday ...This is nearly Avant but grounded in the everyday in the language of many. I have strong prejudices against mainstream TV. Yes, I agree with mr. Gault - time to turn it off but not before you've written this great poem.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-81990837589546107272008-09-30T05:14:00.000-07:002008-09-30T05:14:00.000-07:00The choppy rhythm and periodic alliteration really...The choppy rhythm and periodic alliteration really feed into the way that TV presents us with information. Nice poem.Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08765105091538770825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-72922774024797631832008-09-29T16:55:00.000-07:002008-09-29T16:55:00.000-07:00ah, a very clever and well done piece!ah, a very clever and well done piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-73973040537584169722008-09-29T08:09:00.000-07:002008-09-29T08:09:00.000-07:00by the time i reached the end, i felt as if i coul...by the time i reached the end, i felt as if i could not catch my breath...i think this perfectly captures why i cannot partake of tv very often!qualcosa di bellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-10270854030159013532008-09-29T08:05:00.000-07:002008-09-29T08:05:00.000-07:00How true, how true. It would we USA is going throu...How true, how true. It would we USA is going through this right now. Great writing!!<BR/><BR/>love-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-40387869273197993012008-09-28T10:13:00.000-07:002008-09-28T10:13:00.000-07:00I love politacal poetry!!! very nice!I love politacal poetry!!! very nice!Lenorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-7941750685139009882008-09-28T07:23:00.000-07:002008-09-28T07:23:00.000-07:00the language and images are extraordinary: "unlit ...the language and images are extraordinary: "unlit alleys of distraught emotions." Very evocative, and a nice twist at the end.sgreerpitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-81049818661407085762008-09-28T07:10:00.000-07:002008-09-28T07:10:00.000-07:00I liked the journey it took me....temporalI liked the journey it took me....<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/09/temporal.html" REL="nofollow">temporal</A>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-86099457627972244802008-09-28T05:26:00.000-07:002008-09-28T05:26:00.000-07:00This reminded me of the beatniks in Greenwich Vill...This reminded me of the beatniks in Greenwich Village! Awesome!barbs.haikuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00699709918408183738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-19177244206905207302008-09-28T02:57:00.000-07:002008-09-28T02:57:00.000-07:00Chilling view, but very powerful.Chilling view, but very powerful.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-48383031966489448542008-09-28T01:58:00.000-07:002008-09-28T01:58:00.000-07:00The fleeting, almost non-entity status of modern l...The fleeting, almost non-entity status of modern life flashed on TV. A clever idea. Excellent.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-16222044383388646812008-09-28T00:43:00.000-07:002008-09-28T00:43:00.000-07:00Great images, like an old noir movie - wonderful w...Great images, like an old noir movie - wonderful woork!Deborah Godinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15175977572194074388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-67127092310994757132008-09-28T00:05:00.000-07:002008-09-28T00:05:00.000-07:00Love how the images swirl around and don't settle ...Love how the images swirl around and don't settle into some sense until the final revelation! Almost a mystical artwork of ideas on one hand and like the emblazoned, coded artwork of graffitti on the other!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-31705596768703491292008-09-27T22:59:00.000-07:002008-09-27T22:59:00.000-07:00It sounded just like street beat poetry being read...It sounded just like street beat poetry being read...great stuff!!Beth P.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-75941759019541920152008-09-27T22:08:00.000-07:002008-09-27T22:08:00.000-07:00What a wonderful lead to a great ending!What a wonderful lead to a great ending!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-89721699024516578172008-09-27T22:07:00.000-07:002008-09-27T22:07:00.000-07:00Sounds like it might be time to turn off the t.v.E...Sounds like it might be time to turn off the t.v.<BR/>Excellent poem.<BR/>Thank you for sharing it.Edward S Gaulthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-68030803429292686912008-09-27T21:43:00.000-07:002008-09-27T21:43:00.000-07:00Hi Zoya, until I got to the last line I had your s...Hi Zoya, until I got to the last line I had your situation to be you engrossed into the depth of your newspaper. <BR/>Then you told on the TV. Thank you, that ties things together. I was waiting, knowing you would tell.<BR/>..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-873958774920099092008-09-27T21:38:00.000-07:002008-09-27T21:38:00.000-07:00Reading this was like sitting in front of a street...Reading this was like sitting in front of a street artist who gets the portrait exactly right. Thanks!SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com