tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post5840743712893899882..comments2023-07-01T02:25:10.760-07:00Comments on somewhere beyond: transience_permanencezoya gautamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-15527080821038938982008-06-21T21:55:00.000-07:002008-06-21T21:55:00.000-07:00..i always look forward eagerly to Ur Comments..Ma.....i always look forward eagerly to Ur Comments..Many Thanks <BR/>To All of U..zoya gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-79400067760034901042008-06-19T03:23:00.000-07:002008-06-19T03:23:00.000-07:00ah, the permanence of transienceah, the permanence of transienceDeLihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-51036920511147693302008-06-17T21:23:00.000-07:002008-06-17T21:23:00.000-07:00"a day in her bag..." I loved that! JP/deb"a day in her bag..." I loved that! JP/debJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-30307444819515796602008-06-17T16:19:00.000-07:002008-06-17T16:19:00.000-07:00an adventure in the day of... related as if a drea...an adventure in the day of... related as if a dream.. the flame that still burns... awesome...little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-25155222312064276982008-06-17T07:23:00.000-07:002008-06-17T07:23:00.000-07:00What a wonderful series!What a wonderful series!Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-36440269717390973362008-06-16T19:16:00.000-07:002008-06-16T19:16:00.000-07:00I really like your first line. . .it caught my att...I really like your first line. . .it caught my attention immediately. This poem has such a childish cheerfulness about it.Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08765105091538770825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-61550867974094369652008-06-16T10:04:00.000-07:002008-06-16T10:04:00.000-07:00This poem is so light-hearted and fun. You captur...This poem is so light-hearted and fun. You captured the transience of the sun perfectly and playfully!Terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-86291922461757266492008-06-16T06:24:00.000-07:002008-06-16T06:24:00.000-07:00the time & space of childhood perfectly captured.....the time & space of childhood perfectly captured...i felt like i was walking in memories!qualcosa di bellohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-50677858369664348892008-06-15T13:22:00.000-07:002008-06-15T13:22:00.000-07:00That last line pulls it all together with what was...That last line pulls it all together with what was a really nice surprise to me, but maybe it shouldn't have been given all the ongoing changes. :-) Fascinating weaving of unusual imagery throughout.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-9333246121278188562008-06-15T12:18:00.000-07:002008-06-15T12:18:00.000-07:00Lots of wonderful imagery. I like the line about ...Lots of wonderful imagery. I like the line about the "stupid sun" and the "orange travler" who "becomes her firefly!" Well done!Kathie Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10377224759599266209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-12032800196837765842008-06-15T10:34:00.000-07:002008-06-15T10:34:00.000-07:00DelightfulDelightfulRachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-22903945572785499652008-06-15T08:59:00.000-07:002008-06-15T08:59:00.000-07:00Wonderful reflection on how transience and permane...Wonderful reflection on how transience and permanence flow together across timeRavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-67095427542662222822008-06-15T03:10:00.000-07:002008-06-15T03:10:00.000-07:00The other school at the end might as well be the s...The other school at the end might as well be the same school 40 years later as the same scene plays itself out again. I loved this!Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16660942367303941481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-31375395787411927652008-06-15T02:42:00.000-07:002008-06-15T02:42:00.000-07:00From your opening line you had my interest captiva...From your opening line you had my interest captivated. I enjoy the way the role of the sun throughout highlights the transience of the day. Lovely.<BR/><A HREF="http://naturetales.blogspot.com/" REL="nofollow"> nature tales and camera trails</A>me ann my camerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06083671096943783249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-52068041137910195342008-06-15T02:16:00.000-07:002008-06-15T02:16:00.000-07:00I enjoy the way objects change size and form as th...I enjoy the way objects change size and form as the day (life) progresses through your poem. The constant movement underlines the pace at which life moves. Well done. Thanks.<BR/><A HREF="http://slcpoems.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Writing in Faith: Poems</A>SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com