tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post3781981853145887946..comments2023-07-01T02:25:10.760-07:00Comments on somewhere beyond: freedom to the rainzoya gautamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-83428507474404049952008-06-12T14:16:00.000-07:002008-06-12T14:16:00.000-07:00Simply engaging piece … I enjoy the cadences and j...Simply engaging piece … I enjoy the cadences and juxtapositions! Thank you ;--)<BR/>Hugs and blessings,storytellerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14101550406171982090noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-14350130338180582522008-06-09T08:55:00.000-07:002008-06-09T08:55:00.000-07:00This was wonderful Zoya. Unique and with a nice rh...This was wonderful Zoya. Unique and with a nice rhythm too. <BR/><BR/>www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-30324419322228293222008-06-07T19:29:00.000-07:002008-06-07T19:29:00.000-07:00..with gratitude i express my Thankfulness for All.....with gratitude i express my Thankfulness for All Ur Comments which are so Helpful..zoya gautamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18260853657724890897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-87362642809539870042008-06-04T12:22:00.000-07:002008-06-04T12:22:00.000-07:00I'm with Sandy--"In your eyes, the noun becomes a ...I'm with Sandy--"In your eyes, the noun becomes a verb." This is splendid, zg.WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-24069675631177221382008-06-03T17:44:00.000-07:002008-06-03T17:44:00.000-07:00yeah, what they all said!!!yeah, what they all said!!!little wing writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-54326556704221859182008-06-02T14:03:00.000-07:002008-06-02T14:03:00.000-07:00'a verb becomes a noun'...is seems as if the verb ...'a verb becomes a noun'...is seems as if the verb has become transformed upon finding a place of being.me ann my camerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06083671096943783249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-21703197452095623852008-06-02T09:17:00.000-07:002008-06-02T09:17:00.000-07:00you have woven a tapestry of beautiful words...you have woven a tapestry of beautiful words...Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-22653641410527301912008-06-02T08:48:00.000-07:002008-06-02T08:48:00.000-07:00What a gorgeous poem of love!!What a gorgeous poem of love!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-89857362423407595852008-06-01T23:08:00.000-07:002008-06-01T23:08:00.000-07:00It sounds like you love the person who is crying, ...It sounds like you love the person who is crying, and that they feel better after the cry. :)Joycehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15201951577572323343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-35540531386864088392008-06-01T18:45:00.000-07:002008-06-01T18:45:00.000-07:00Beautiful poem. I especially like the line "on my ...Beautiful poem. I especially like the line "on my lips/a lifeless word/in your eyes/a pearl alive!" A wonderful illustration of a loving relationship.Rae Trigghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10727737549878623376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-40054680833120301962008-06-01T17:32:00.000-07:002008-06-01T17:32:00.000-07:00ahh..this is so beautiful; the imagery, the langua...ahh..this is so beautiful; the imagery, the language and the message...you have a talent for 'floetry' - the way a poem flows.Ms Afropolitanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16456916593005915089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-12451995041390929812008-06-01T15:30:00.000-07:002008-06-01T15:30:00.000-07:00Very nice. And Sandy said it so well. That was my...Very nice. And Sandy said it so well. That was my favorite line too!<BR/><BR/>;-)<BR/><BR/>Blessings,<BR/>Linda<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://nickersandinkblog.blogspot.com/2008/05/dress-blues.html" REL="nofollow">DRESS BLUES, at Nickers and Ink</A>LA Nickershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14891624164014505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-82378459980815233012008-06-01T14:35:00.000-07:002008-06-01T14:35:00.000-07:00So much to like about this poem - you've put toget...So much to like about this poem - you've put together a great piece! <BR/><BR/>I think these lines are my fave -<BR/><BR/>"on my lips<BR/>a lifeless word<BR/>in your eyes<BR/>a pearl alive!"Pirate Princesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12164956276371481421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-70372742220032109682008-06-01T14:23:00.000-07:002008-06-01T14:23:00.000-07:00"a question, a statement?or both!in your eyesthe v..."a question, <BR/>a statement?<BR/>or both!<BR/>in your eyes<BR/>the verb <BR/>becomes a noun!<BR/>on my lips<BR/>a lifeless word<BR/>in your eyes<BR/>a pearl alive!"<BR/><BR/>Really nice and intriguing imagery to ponder in the lines above.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-41511790680930725692008-06-01T13:49:00.000-07:002008-06-01T13:49:00.000-07:00"absorbed with love/returned as rain" - wonderful ..."absorbed with love/returned as rain" - wonderful line, along with others mentioned. That one is my favorite. One of my favorite little pieces of life trivia is that the chemical make-up of tears we cry from emotion is different than the chemical make-up of tears we cry peeling onions. I think that's just incredible. Good poem.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-262187949590964142008-06-01T12:09:00.000-07:002008-06-01T12:09:00.000-07:00"a tear/absorbed with love/returned as rain" how b..."a tear/absorbed with love/returned as rain" how beautiful, zoya! Thank you very much! :Dmaryt/theteachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17516961981692076719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-60499451237418978082008-06-01T11:16:00.000-07:002008-06-01T11:16:00.000-07:00I really like the unusual use of punctuation in th...I really like the unusual use of punctuation in this poem. Also a nice use of the two "tears".Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08765105091538770825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-61477247128205332752008-06-01T08:53:00.000-07:002008-06-01T08:53:00.000-07:00Wonderful tight poem! I agree with Sandy - love i...Wonderful tight poem! I agree with Sandy - love <I>in your eyes<BR/>the verb becomes a noun!</I><BR/><BR/>Peace,<BR/>JanePoetJP/debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-64415800823759813872008-06-01T08:25:00.000-07:002008-06-01T08:25:00.000-07:00'on my lips a lifeless word' is so true! Until it ...'on my lips a lifeless word' is so true! Until it reaches the ear of the listener or the eye of the reader it really is lifeless. Thank you, I really enjoyed this.Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16660942367303941481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319385256731961761.post-69235656953304173542008-06-01T05:14:00.000-07:002008-06-01T05:14:00.000-07:00I love the line, "In your eyes, a verb becomes a n...I love the line, "In your eyes, a verb becomes a noun." This is a wonderful poem on the relationship between language and emotion--and relationship! Thanks.<BR/><A HREF="http://slcpoems.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Writing in Faith: Poems</A>SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.com